However, the problem I'm facing with my current treatment is uneven pacing. Certain expository elements can't really be reduced in size much, such as the backstory of a fictitious society that plays a big role in the unfolding plot; other elements, such as action scenes, can be reduced to one or two sentences. This poses two problems: One, since most of the exposition is towards the beginning ...
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Instead, he employs narration, gestures, or just an absence of tags to control the situational framework and the pacing of conversations and exchanges between characters.
I am extremely lucky here with my critique partners/Alphas, and all suggestions I have gotten were helpful, considerate and very thorough in their own way, whatever I asked, be it technical/realism stuff - Alpha-Zero, hear me? - flow/pacing or characterisation and the reader's perspective, it always is enlightening to get their comments.
I'm mostly just looking for someone to judge the characters, setting, and plot/pacing. I basically just need to know what you like about it, what you don't like about it, and what's confusing.
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